Orange
darkness falls
jack o’lanterns glow
on orange flowers
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| Picture by Leonie W. |
Red
with a red pen
she marks the paper
mistaken kisses
Black
Hebridean flock
nuit noire
darkness
moon, Mercury, space station,
then headlights
Hebridean flock
grazing by Rutland Water
black sheep all
nuit noire
lune, Mercure, station spatiale,
et phares de voiture
darkness
moon, Mercury, space station,
then headlights
Green
an age-crazed plate
spring greens
he starts to paint
on his palette
a medley
of spring greens
glacé au soleil
verre luisant
diabolo-menthe
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| One from about 1985 |
ice cold in the sun
gleaming glass
mint-lemonade
Blue
glimmering lake
through the beech trees
bluebells
White
cloudless sky
the calm lake mirrors
Aoraki's snow
ciel sans nuages
lac calme qui réfléchit
les neiges éternelles
Turquoise
turquoise jewel
refracting light
Lake Tekapo
powdered rock
refracted light
a turquoise lake
5 comments:
I like your haikus.
Can you remind me of the rules ?
And I like Esther's photo too.
https://sites.google.com/site/graceguts/essays/haiku-checklist
These are quite useful to look at - I'm constantly learning, but when I break the rules I claim it's an ALIku.
There are two facebook pages - NaHaiWriMo
and NaHaiWriMo en français.
That's where the prompts have come from each day in February.
Merci.
Penses-tu que j'ai respecté les règles ?
J'ai vu balayer
Ma rue est sale c'est vrai
Mais surtout gelée
J'essaie d'abord en français, l'anglais viendra plus tard.
I'll get back to you - but haiku don't usually rhyme. I'm not an expert - I keep making mistakes. I'm trying to find an open accessible site for haiku in French, as the two I use most are English ones.
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