Monday, March 26, 2012

sky again

 ruddy-winged starlings
fly as sunset glows below
new moon and Venus

sunset glow  birds flight
crescent moon and half Venus
and a vapour trail

or perhaps better than either:

starlings' wings glow pink
above the sunset
new moon and Venus

1 comment:

Chloe Greene said...

Yes I like the third one the best.

Very evocative.

Skies have been wonderful the last few nights.